Monday, May 08, 2006

An endeavor forever to wisely waste time
Each moment comes severed by a senseless, rhythm-less rhyme
While breathing I’m singing my own lifeless tune
Just drifting, careening with the ebb of the moon
So peaceful, yet disgusting; Hate life when serene
Disdainful, untrusting; and many such moments I've seen
So strive while alive with an Nihilist's eyes
And knowing, time is flowing, refracting my life's lies
The horizon regresses, time slows down, and dies

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Blogger Unknown said...

An endeavor forever to wisely waste time -- Does something like a wise wastage of time exist? Every moment of life we waste comes back to haunt us at times when we are awfully short of those precious seconds!
"Each moment comes severed by a senseless, rhythm-less rhyme" - Wow Lovely.... But then, its the music of YOUR life... You need to get the hang of the rhythm and should be able/willing to tap your feet to it as well...
"While breathing I’m singing my own lifeless tune" -- As soon as you start doing the singing part life no longer seems like a rhytmless rhyme, does it? :)
"Just drifting, careening with the ebb of the moon" -- to be contended you need to change with the tide not the ebb, me thinks...
"So peaceful, yet disgusting; Hate life when serene" -- Ha! This might seem pessimistic to a lot of your readers but then I believe, it IS those darkest hours of our life that teach us the most important lessons... No wonder then, serenity is a waste of time... But I would prefer it to the tumultous tempests of destiny any hour of the day...
"Disdainful, untrusting; and many such moments I've seen" -- You mean to say all those silent moments seem like the foreboding of the tough ones to come?
"So strive while alive with an Nihilist's eyes" -- Nihilist is so correct! It is the total chaos and annihilation that the mind desires when it is on a quest to conquer the self... You annihilate the myth of peace to conquer peace... Nihilist is apt here!
"And knowing, time is flowing, refracting my life's lies" -- the lies of our lives, i have learnt, are many a times the truths of our destiny.. you can escape life, not destiny...
"The horizon regresses, time slows down, and dies " -- it is me and you that die, time is there forever as a testimonial to our failures, our triumphs, our valors, our cowardice, of our sorrows, our joys and all other bad things that could have happened to us had we not acted fast or of the good things that could have happened too if we had meant it to :)

2:45 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Do you exist or are you a fragment of my mind

6:51 PM  

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